Comments on: Friday Flash – Trapped

By: alan

alan — Wed, 16 Dec 2009 03:52:16 +0000

Thanks peggy.

By: peggy

peggy — Wed, 16 Dec 2009 03:41:12 +0000

I was so there! Great writing, pulled me in and didn’t let go. The ending was fantastic.

By: alan

alan — Tue, 15 Dec 2009 09:01:49 +0000

Thanks mate.

By: James Frost

James Frost — Tue, 15 Dec 2009 08:57:41 +0000

Very dark and highly disturbing – definitely belongs in the basement. Well written.

By: alan

alan — Sun, 13 Dec 2009 21:58:21 +0000

Thanks Oliva

By: Oliva Tejeda

Oliva Tejeda — Sun, 13 Dec 2009 14:34:06 +0000

Even though he was so venomous and harsh, I still felt sorry for him. That is, up until the end. She may be giving him porridge, but I’d say he’s getting his just desserts. That was excellent! ~ Olivia

By: J. M. Strother

J. M. Strother — Sun, 13 Dec 2009 02:41:51 +0000

Yeah, but nobody is great at everything. I’ll hold out that she can’t cook.
~jon

By: alan

alan — Sun, 13 Dec 2009 02:00:11 +0000

Well, it’s probably amazing porridge. You know, she’d do anything to try to give him some quality of life after the terrible thing that happened to him.

By: J. M. Strother

J. M. Strother — Sun, 13 Dec 2009 01:41:57 +0000

And I hope it’s bad porridge to boot!
~jon

By: Linda

Linda — Sun, 13 Dec 2009 00:59:53 +0000

Well, they do say for better or worse. Nice and dark, and bitter. Like my favorite chocolate. Peace, Linda